Use bullet points in web copy. Please.
True story: In 2008, we were conducting a usability lab for a client on the outskirts of Chicago. While the computers and cameras were getting wired and fired up, we expressed concerns about the framing of content on the client’s site. “There’s too much text, all of it badly structured. Users want to scan,” we said, “They want to make it though quickly. They want bullet points.”
For most normal people (no, readers, you & I are not normal people), web content and its structure is pretty ho-hum. It’s likely to inspire yawns and glazed-over eyes. And that’s what happened to our clients.
Then the tests began. Most of the users got lost in the sea of words on the screen—to the degree that they had trouble completing tasks—, but they didn’t have the words to identify exactly what exactly was confusing them.
Then, several participants in, one of the testers said, “This is too much text. I wish the important stuff was listed in bullet points.”
Honest to god. My heart melted like ice cream in August sun.
And guess what happened during the debrief? Our clients got it. From the mouths of babes, and all that… That’s what it took to make it sink in, not some egg-heady UXers telling them so. It took a real user begging for simple dots to break things up into logical, easily digestible chunks.
The best part of this story is that I now have a real anecdote to tell clients. I can say, “Users want bullet points—here’s how I know…”
In closing:
- Bullet points?
- Bullet points.
- Three cheers for bullet points!
- Huzzah.
- (Guh, lame, I know.)
